Script Editor & Script Doctor · Blackmore Script Room
36
Sessions
4.6 ★
21 ratings
4
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I'm a script editor and script doctor with eighteen years across film, television, and theatre. I've worked on six commissioned features and three TV seasons as an in-house story editor. My work is unglamorous and specific: beat-sheet review, dialogue polish, pacing, and the hard conversations with writers about what their script is actually doing. I'm not a 'co-writer' and I'm not in your credits — I'm the person the writer brings in when they need to see the script clearly again. I have strong opinions about second acts and the overuse of voiceover.
Beat-sheet review, dialogue polish, and the honest conversations that unstick a second act.
Duration: 10 min
A short call to see if we're right for each other.
Honest fit assessment
Free
Duration: 30 min
Bring one scene and I'll give you the honest read.
Line-level feedback on one scene
$150
Duration: 60 min
A focused hour on your beat sheet or act structure.
A clearer act structure or beat sheet
$340
$306/ session
3-pack · $918 total
$1,020 if bought singly
Duration: 90 min
A 90-minute session covering the whole draft with structural and page-level notes.
A comprehensive notes pass on the full draft
$520
$458/ session
3-pack · $1,373 total
$1,560 if bought singly
Eighteen years as a script editor across features, television, and theatre.
Commissioned features and long-running TV credits.
Theatre story-editor credits at Sydney Theatre Company and Belvoir.
“Theo delivered notes I couldn't argue with and didn't want to. That's the right kind of note.”